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应该说先进武器没有写到家(这要靠幻想和想象),没有很大的场面(时间所不允许文章太短)<br>智慧,手段,政治,民众一心,特别是好战分子-学生!太简单,要复杂要有分析<br><br>这样的文章至少要写的像<大唐>那样长,不过我还是很佩服这个人!<br>希望你继续......<br> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(y)--><img src='http://www.kaiyuan.org/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/thumbs_up.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='thumbs_up.gif'><!--endemo--> |
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